Kia ora Lucy, good try at showing how the moon changes. Maybe you could separate the new moon and the new moon as they are 2 different things. And yes - if you changed the background that would help show the shapes. from Mrs Torrie
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Kia ora Lucy,
ReplyDeletegood try at showing how the moon changes.
Maybe you could separate the new moon and the new moon as they are 2 different things. And yes - if you changed the background that would help show the shapes.
from Mrs Torrie