Friday, 20 March 2020

What is on the Shore?


We are learning to use to use adjectives
to add detail to our writing.
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3 comments:

  1. Robyn Shaw21 April 2020 at 05:40

    You have given detail by using rich adjectives Lucy. I like how you have used alliteration too. Can you spot where?

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  2. Anonymous24 April 2020 at 11:21

    Hi Lucy, I love your background. I liked the adjectives you used.
    What is your favourite thing at the beach?
    From Billie.

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  3. Anonymous5 May 2020 at 11:20

    Hi Lucy
    this was a great poem with wonderful adjectives,it made me want to go to the beach.
    Liam Schwartz from kokatahi school hokitika

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